No.19110 2019-12-18 |
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[Senior 3-3] | |
À§´×Æù Ãßõ 1À§ ¼ö° Èıâ | (´ëÈÁÖÁ¦ : ¿À´ÃÀº ÀÚ¿øºÀ»ç¿¡ ´ëÇؼ À̾߱âÇØ º¸¾Ò½À´Ï´Ù.) »ý¼ÒÇÑ ´Ü¾î¸¦ ÀÌ¿ëÇؼ ´ëȸ¦ ÇÒ¼ö ÀÖ¾î¼ À¯ÀÍÇß¾î¿ä~ Ä£ÀýÇÏ°Ô °¡¸£ÃÄ Áּż °¨»çÇÕ´Ï´Ù^^ |
ID : minworl | |
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TUTOR : hanna |
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No.18823 2018-12-19 |
[OPIc A] |
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À§´×Æù Ãßõ 1À§ ¼ö° Èıâ | (´ëÈÁÖÁ¦ : ¿À´ÃÀº ¿ªÀ¸·Î Áú¹® 3°¡Áö¸¦ ÇÏ´Â ½Ã°£À» °¡Á³½À´Ï´Ù. ÃÖ±Ù¿¡ º» ¿µÈ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ À̾߱⿴´Âµ¥ Àú´Â ¹«¾ùÀ» º¸¾Ò°í ¾î¶®´ÂÁö, ³ª¿¡°Ô ÃßõÇØÁÙ ÀÇÇâÀÌ ÀÖ´Â Áö ¹°¾îº¸¾Ò½À´Ï´Ù) ´Ü¾î¿Í ¹®ÀåÀ» ÀûÀýÇÏ°Ô ¼öÁ¤ÇØÁÖ¾î¼ µµ¿òÀÌ ¸¹ÀÌ µÇ¾ú½À´Ï´Ù ¿À´Ãµµ ÁÁÀº °ÀÇ °í¸¶¿ö¿ä!! ¼ö¾÷ÀÌ ¾ó¸¶ ¾È³²¾Ò³×¿ä...³²Àº ½Ã°£µµ ÈÀÌÆÃÇØ¿ä!! 2018-12-18 ¼ö¾÷¿¡ ´ëÇÑ ÈıâÀÔ´Ï´Ù. |
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ID : jsh0622 | | (lv.25) | TUTOR : tori |
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No.18822 2018-12-19 |
[Free Talking] |
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À§´×Æù Ãßõ 1À§ ¼ö° Èıâ | (´ëÈÁÖÁ¦ : today we talk about korean drama and debate A book's topic animal. it was enjoyable talking time.) we can talk about new topic so it is good Thank you for caring my english ! 2018-12-18 ¼ö¾÷¿¡ ´ëÇÑ ÈıâÀÔ´Ï´Ù. |
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ID : un0971 | | (lv.10) | TUTOR : tori |
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No.18821 2018-12-18 |
[OPIc A] |
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À§´×Æù Ãßõ 1À§ ¼ö° Èıâ | (´ëÈÁÖÁ¦ : ¿À´ÃÀº ÈÞÀÏ¿¡ ¿ì¸®Áý¿¡ »ç¶÷µéÀ» ÃÊ´ëÇÑ °æÇè¿¡ ´ëÇؼ À̾߱â ÇÏ¿´½À´Ï´Ù. Àú´Â Å©¸®½º¸¶½º¿¡ ºÎ¸ð´Ô²²¼ ¿©ÇàÀ» °¡½Ã°ï ÇÏ´Â µ¥ ±×¶§ Ä£±¸µé°ú ¸ÀÀÖ´Â À½½Äµµ ¸Ô°í °ÔÀÓµµ ÇÑ´Ù°í À̾߱â ÇÏ¿´½À´Ï´Ù) Ç×»ó À¯ÄèÇÑ °ÀÇ°¡ ÁøÇàµÇ¾î¼ Áö·çÇÏÁö ¾Ê½À´Ï´Ù ¿À´Ãµ· ÁÁÀº ´ëÈ °í¸¶¿ö¿ä!!! ³»Àϵµ Àß ºÎŹÇØ¿ä:) 2018-12-17 ¼ö¾÷¿¡ ´ëÇÑ ÈıâÀÔ´Ï´Ù. |
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ID : jsh0622 | | (lv.25) | TUTOR : tori |
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No.18820 2018-12-18 |
[Free Talking] |
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À§´×Æù Ãßõ 1À§ ¼ö° Èıâ | (´ëÈÁÖÁ¦ : ¿À´ÃÀº ÁÖ¸»¿¡ ¹«¾ùÀ» Çß´ÂÁö¿¡ ´ëÇؼ À̾߱⠳ª´©¾ú½À´Ï´Ù.) person °ú people, men À» ±¸ºÐÇÏ´Â ¿¬½ÀÀ» ÇÏ¿´½À´Ï´Ù. ¹®Àå¿¡¼ »ç¿ëÇÒ ¶§¿¡, ¾î¶»°Ô Ç¥ÇöÇØ¾ß ÇÏ´ÂÁö ¾Ë°ÔµÇ¾ú½À´Ï´Ù. ´Ã Àß °¡¸£ÃÄÁּż °¨»çÇÕ´Ï´Ù! õõÈ÷ Àß µé¾îÁÖ°í Àß °íÃÄÁ༠°¨»çÇÕ´Ï´Ù! 2018-12-17 ¼ö¾÷¿¡ ´ëÇÑ ÈıâÀÔ´Ï´Ù. |
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ID : so4753 | | (lv.23) | TUTOR : tori |
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No.18819 2018-12-18 |
[Free Talking] |
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À§´×Æù Ãßõ 1À§ ¼ö° Èıâ | (´ëÈÁÖÁ¦ : ¿À´ÃÀº Çʸ®ÇÉ ¹Ì½ºÀ¯´Ï¹ö½º¿¡ ´ëÇÑ ´º½º¸¦ µé¾ú¾î¿ä. ¸ô¶ú´ø ³»¿ëÀ̶ó ¿øÈ°ÇÑ ´ëÈ°¡ ¾ÈµÇ¾ú´ø°Å°°½À´Ï´Ù.¤Ð) ¿À´ÃÀº ÀüȽð£ÀÌ Âª°Ô ´À²¸Á³¾î¿ä. Á¦°¡ Á»´õ ³ë·ÂÇؾßÇϴµ¥, ³Ê¹« ´À¸´´À¸´ ¸»Çؼ ÇÏ´Ù°¡ È帧ÀÌ ²÷°å¾î¿ä ¤Ð ´ÙÀ½¹ø¿¡´Â debate ¼ö¾÷¿¡ ¹Ù·Î µé¾î°¡¸é ÁÁÀ»°Å°°¾Æ¿ë¤»¤» 2018-12-17 ¼ö¾÷¿¡ ´ëÇÑ ÈıâÀÔ´Ï´Ù. |
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ID : un0971 | | (lv.10) | TUTOR : tori |
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No.18818 2018-12-14 |
[OPIc A] |
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À§´×Æù Ãßõ 1À§ ¼ö° Èıâ | (´ëÈÁÖÁ¦ : ¿À´ÃÀº Ä£±¸µé°ú ÀüÈÇÒ ¶§ ÁÖ·Î ¹«½¼ À̾߱⸦ ÇÏ´Â Áö¿¡ ´ëÇؼ ´ëȸ¦ ³ª´©¾ú½À´Ï´Ù. Àú´Â ÁÖ·Î ½ºÆ÷Ã÷, °ÔÀÓ, µ¥ÀÌÆ®¿¡ °üÇÑ ´ëȸ¦ ³ª´«´Ù°í ¸»Çß½À´Ï´Ù) Ç×»ó Á¤È®ÇÑ ¹®ÀåÀ» ¾Ë·ÁÁÖ¾î¼ µµ¿òÀÌ ¸¹ÀÌ µÇ°í ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù ´öºÐ¿¡ ¿µ¾î¸»Çϱ⿡ ´ëÇÑ ºÒ¾ÈÇÔÀÌ ¸¹ÀÌ ÇؼҵǾú¾î¿ä¤¾¤¾¤¾°í¸¶¿ö¿ä! 2018-12-13 ¼ö¾÷¿¡ ´ëÇÑ ÈıâÀÔ´Ï´Ù. |
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ID : jsh0622 | | (lv.25) | TUTOR : tori |
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No.18817 2018-12-13 |
[Debate A] |
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À§´×Æù Ãßõ 1À§ ¼ö° Èıâ | (´ëÈÁÖÁ¦ : We had a talk about what is better between learning from books and experience.) I can correct my accent which is unnecessarily strong. I am really thankful for your optimistic energy and kind correction. 2018-12-12 ¼ö¾÷¿¡ ´ëÇÑ ÈıâÀÔ´Ï´Ù. |
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ID : lhn1120 | | (lv.1) | TUTOR : tori |
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No.18816 2018-12-13 |
[OPIc A] |
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À§´×Æù Ãßõ 1À§ ¼ö° Èıâ | (´ëÈÁÖÁ¦ : ¿À´ÃÀº Ä£±¸ÀÇ ºÎŹ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ ³»¿ëÀ» À̾߱â Çß½À´Ï´Ù. ¸¸ÀÏ Ä£±¸°¡ µ·À» ºô·Á´Þ¶ó°í ÇÒ °æ¿ì ¾î¶»°Ô À̾߱â ÇÒ °ÍÀÎÁö¿¡ ´ëÇØ ´ëȸ¦ ³ª´©¾ú½À´Ï´Ù) ´õ ÁÁÀº ¹®¹ý, ¹®ÀåÀ» ¾Ë·ÁÁÖ¾î¼ µµ¿òÀÌ ¸¹ÀÌ µÇ¾ú½À´Ï´Ù ¿À´Ãµµ À¯ÀÍÇÑ ½Ã°£À̾ú¾î¿ä!!! ³»Àϵµ Àß ºÎŹÇؿ䤾¤¾¤¾¤¾ 2018-12-12 ¼ö¾÷¿¡ ´ëÇÑ ÈıâÀÔ´Ï´Ù. |
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ID : jsh0622 | | (lv.25) | TUTOR : tori |
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No.18815 2018-12-12 |
[Free Talking] |
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À§´×Æù Ãßõ 1À§ ¼ö° Èıâ | (´ëÈÁÖÁ¦ : ¿À´ÃÀº ¿¬¿¹Àο¡ ´ëÇÑ À̾߱⸦ ³ª´©¾ú½À´Ï´Ù. ¿¹Àü¿¡ È°µ¿ÇÏ´ø ¿¬¿¹ÀκÎÅÍ ¿äÁò ÀαâÀÖ´Â ¿¬¿¹Àΰú È°µ¿ ÀÛÇ°µé¿¡ ´ëÇؼ ÇÁ¸®ÅäÅ·À» ÇÏ¿´½À´Ï´Ù^^) »ç¶÷À» ¼Ò°³ÇÒ ¶§ ÁÖ·Î ¾²´Â ¹®Àå°ú ¾îÈÖ¸¦ ¸¹ÀÌ »ç¿ëÇÏ¿´°í Ʋ¸° ¹®¹ýÀ¸·Î µÈ ¹®ÀåµéÀ» ±³Á¤¹Þ¾Ò½À´Ï´Ù. Áñ°Ì°Ô ¼ö¾÷À» À̲ø¾îÁּż °¨»çÇÕ´Ï´Ù^^ 2018-12-11 ¼ö¾÷¿¡ ´ëÇÑ ÈıâÀÔ´Ï´Ù. |
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ID : angela12 | | (lv.12) | TUTOR : tori |
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No.18814 2018-12-12 |
[OPIc A] |
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À§´×Æù Ãßõ 1À§ ¼ö° Èıâ | (´ëÈÁÖÁ¦ : ¿À´ÃÀº ¿©ÇàÀ» °¥ ¶§ °¡¹æ¿¡ ¹«¾ùÀ» ³Ö´Â Áö¿¡ ´ëÇؼ À̾߱⸦ Çß½À´Ï´Ù. Àú´Â ¿©¹úÀÇ ¿Ê°ú ·Î¼Ç, ÀÛÀº °¡¹æÀ» ³Ö´Â´Ù°í À̾߱â Çß½À´Ï´Ù) ´õ ³ªÀº ¹®Àå, ´Ü¾î¸¦ ¾Ë·ÁÁÖ¾î¼ ¿µ¾î½Ç·ÂÀÌ Çâ»óµÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ´À³§´Ï´Ù ¿À´Ãµµ ÁÁÀº ³»¿ë¾Ë·ÁÁÖ¾î¼ °í¸¶¿ö¿ä~~~¤¾¤¾¤¾ 2018-12-11 ¼ö¾÷¿¡ ´ëÇÑ ÈıâÀÔ´Ï´Ù. |
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ID : jsh0622 | | (lv.25) | TUTOR : tori |
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